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As hours past,
My heart was turning bitter.
I so, so, so very wanted
For you to come back.

Two years,
Two years at war.
And when you left, you told me,
”You’re what I’m fighting for.”

Well, if you’re not here,
Then you’ve left me alone.
You made me think so many times that
You were gone from me.
At least, that’s what I thought,
Until you showed up at our door.
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:D You guys don't know accomplished I feel. :love: =robostorm, an amazing and talented poet that I can't even BEGIN to compare myself to, LIKED this poem I wrote. I'M SO FREAKING HAPPY! :squee:

Uh... *ahem* Anyway! The topic for her commission is 'Love In The Distance', as you can tell from the title. :) Hope you all like it!
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Mood: dA Love =robostorm Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I cannot even begin to say how much I love this poem!!! It is so beautiful.
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~DALover26 Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks !!!!! :aww: You're so sweet! (I still say this even though I know that you're older. XD) ... Hmm, does that count as disrespectful? ... PROBABLY! XD
Ahh, I'm ranting, sorry! Lol
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=robostorm Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm older? How old do you think I am? It isn't disrespectful at all and don't worry about ranting, I do it all the time, lol!
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~DALover26 Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well... I don't know... you act more maturely to me. That's what I was basing it off of really. Oh and um, I'm not actually suposed to have an account on here... how old are you supposed to be again? XD
RANTING FOR THW WIN! :iconflailgasmplz:
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=robostorm Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Alright then I suppose that you are younger than me! I'm only 17 as of dec 24th. I guess I really shouldn't say 'only' though since I am older than quite a few on here.
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~DALover26 Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nah, your obeying the rules lol. Obviously, I DON'T! :dummy: lol
Oh, and, you and I are opposites. I'm younger than lots of people here! XD
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Mood: Love ~BubblyAnaRocks3 Jan 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Nice poem
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~DALover26 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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~DALover26 Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD THANK YOU! :D
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